Remove All Soft Drinks Vending Machines From A School Site?

Please could you write a paragraph (or more or less) stating why all soft drink vending machines should be removed from the school site. Here is a point:
1. Too much junk food is bad for the health. It has too much fat, sugar, salt and artificial colouring which can lead to heart disease.
Please include: double commas,semi colons, 2 noun phrases and 3 linking words. in the paragraph you are going to write stating why all soft drinks vending machines should be removed from a school site)
Thank you :)
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One Response to “Remove All Soft Drinks Vending Machines From A School Site?”

  1. kid pink Says:

    Too much junk food is bad for the health. It has too much fat, sugar, salt and artificial colouring which can lead to heart disease.

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